Creative and powerful!
Onyxrose.. .
I felt my heart explode
One more step.. .
and. .. I.. . FOLD.
Breath!!
I demand sweetly.. .
Taken a b a c k
My HEART has been attacked
Dark Shadows arose
climbing,
entwining.. .
Wanting to win
I don’t give in.. .
I feel its breath
beating upon my neck
the heaviness.. like a simple request
my force relents a bit.. .
But I’m not All IN
I’ll climb a little higher
I’ll climb until I’m calmer
OnyxRose
You cannot commit
to this razor-sharp edge
that edge you once lived~NLM
Thank you hon. 🤗
My pleasure really related to your poem..